Conflict setting 1
'Cold to crack the stones. To take your life'
Religious conflict 1
'Have you a neck by which to throttle you? Have you a heart? Damn you eternally have you a soul?
religious conflict 2
'God he whispered'
religious conflict 3
'He looked at the old man. Perhaps he'd turn into a god and they to trees'
conflict woman vs man
'please don't do this. I'm sorry. I cant do it alone.'
conflict woman vs man 2
'Will you tell him goodbye? No. I will not'
conflict others vs man 1
'They came shuffling through the ash/slouching along with clubs in their hands, lengths of pipe'
conflict others vs man 2
'He'd only taken two steps but he was almost between him and the child' 'levelled the pistol and fired'
setting 1
'The city was mostly burned. No sign of life. Cars in the street caked with ash, everything covered with ash and dust.'
setting 2
'A corpse in the doorway dried to leather. Grimacing at the day.'
setting 3
'the country as far as they could see was burned away, the blackened shapes of rock standing out of the shoals of ash and billows of ash rising up'
setting 4
'the mummied dead everywhere'
setting 5
'The flesh cloven along the bones, the ligaments dried to tug and taut as wires'
Tension between morality
'Are we still the good guys? He said. Yes. We're still the good guys'
internal tension
'He said the right dreams for a man in peril were dreams of peril and all else was the call of languor and of death'
tension between boy and father
'The boy clutching his forehead, covered with gore and mute as a stone'
Isolation from humanity
'he could see almost to the rear of the box. Human bodies'
isolation from his wife
'I'm begging you, he said. No. I will not. I cannot'
isolation from humanity 2
'Did you have any friends?/What happened to them? They died'
isolation from humanity 3
'Coming back he found the bones and the skin piled together with rocks over them. A pool of guts'
symbolism memories
'There was a lake a mile from his uncle's farm where he and his uncle used to go in the fall for firewood'
symbolism dreams 1
'In dreams his pale bride came to him out of a green and leafy canopy'
symbolism dreams 2
'He dreamt of walking in a flowering wood where birds flew before them he and the child'
symbolism dreams 3
'It was a lot scarier in the dream'
symbolism innocence 1
'Do you think there could be fish in the lake?'
symbolism innocence 2
'The boy had found some crayons and painted his facemask with fangs and he trudged on uncomplaining.'
symbolism fire 1
'And we're carrying the fire'
symbolism fire 2
'were carrying the fire'
anti climax coast 1
'everything depended on reaching the coast'
anti climax coast 2
'An hour later they were sitting on the beach and staring out at the wall of smog across the horizon' 'Cold. Desolate. Birdless'
anti climax death of father
'He slept close to his father that night and held him but when he woke in the morning his father was cold and stiff.'
power basement
'help us they whispered. Please help us'
power gun
'carrying only a pistol and a bottle of water'